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Peter was standing in the forest since 8 o'clock in the afternoon. He was waiting for his girlfriend because they were supposed to meet there secretly. They had a whole night planned. First they wanted to go to the movie theater to see a romantic movie ( yes , his girlfriend managed to convince him). Then, they had to go to their friend's party. For the rest of the night, they would spend it alone together watching the stars. But she wasn't there yet. Peter was starting to worry for her. It was getting pretty dark and there were no signs of her yet. He looked at his watch.8:45. They were supposed to be together since 8:30.He started to wonder if his indications were clear for the place they met. And he guessed they weren't. he started walking around to see if he could see her. No sign anywhere. He sat on a stump that was there like waiting for him.
-Man what will I do… if she got lost I'm responsible…
That was it. He had to call her. He tried to reach his mobile in his pocket. As he stood up to dial, he saw a strange plant lying there. Since he was curious about plants, he decided to take a better look at it. The plant was small and spiky. It had a light green color like no other plant he had ever seen. He got his plant encyclopedia out of his backpack. He couldn't go anywhere without it. He browsed in it quickly but couldn't find any similar plant. Automatically, he closed the book and looked back at the plant. Could he have found an unknown species of plant? He decided to take a small leaf as a sample and hide it in his backpack until tomorrow. He started to delicately try to remove a leaf without damaging it but it was definitely difficult. There were too many needles on it. He got impatient and forgot to take precautions.  The poor guy put his hand right on the plant. He removed it quickly and looked at it. There was one little spot bleeding. He stood up and thought that he would need tools to cut this. He walked straight in front of him and eventually arrived at the edge of the forest. He looked around, took a big branch and planted it there as a landmark. He was about to go to his home when he saw something alarming. The hole in his hand had swelled and was light green, like the plant.
-This is not natural, he told to himself. And just that time I forgot to bring my first aid kit.
Peter thought about going to the hospital but he just couldn't abandon the plant. He tried to ignore the wound and go home. He tried to walk but before his feet touched to the ground, his body started to hurt. At first, it wasn't that bad, although it was pretty weird, but then, it got worse. He felt a wave of pain go from the tip of his toe to the top of his head. He fell on the ground and it all began. He looked at his hand and realized it was now all green and scales were appearing all over it.
-What the hell is happening to me? He said in a low voice between two waves of pain
Before he even knew, his whole two arms were covered in greenish scales. It was also happening to his legs. This was no ordinary plant he found. When the scales attained his hips, the pain became even more severe. He couldn't even breathe how this was intense. His spine started to lengthen until it reached a meter long. Peter now had a meter long green tail swinging behind him, which made him feel quite weird at first.
The scales were now covering his entire torso. The pain coming from his legs and hips had now disappeared, giving Peter a necessary break to survive to the rest. Then, it started back. In a loud crack, two scaly bat-like wings erupted from his back, making him twist in pain. The Scales finally attained his head. His whole body was now covered in green scales. His face started to lengthen painfully, until it reached the appearance of a muzzle. His ears pushed back and got membranous and two long horns came to finish his body. He was now just like a dragon, or close. His spine cracked loudly and changed position, forcing him to fall on his four. That position kinda felt unusually better now. He was now a dragon, but his mind still remained intact. He accustomed himself to his new body and tried his fire breath. Then, he remembered. His girlfriend!
Peter's girlfriend was waiting in the forest since 9o'clock. She had difficulty with her parents going to sleep so she could sneak out, but she knew her boyfriend would wait her. At least, she hoped. She started crying when she heard cracks in the forest behind her. She turned just in time to see a small dragon jump on her with a green plant in his mouth. The needles of the plant struck her hand and she managed to push the creature off of her.
The day after, people were at the police station trying to say that they saw two small dragons in the movie theater. Of course, no one believed them
This is my first deviation ever so please, comment wisely.

Its the story of a guy who his in the firest waiting foir his girlfriend when he sees something unusual that makes him turn into something unusual.

Please, give me advices if you can for further writing!

Have a nice time reading it
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laserdragon111 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Like :)
wrapperdragontail Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015
Original y no es mal. 3.5/5 lol jk I live in America, but the rating is real!
Zeyata Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me Gusta.
Guytales Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
r3stl3ss-orange Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Student General Artist
Nice originality!
coco066 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010
Thx ^^
r3stl3ss-orange Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Student General Artist
Marvelous pic.
coco066 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010
Yeah it isnt mine though. I took it on google.
DragonthedreamerX Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
I have never seen a plant become a basis for a transformation

Original. I like it. Keep up the good work.
coco066 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Thx! I definitly felt inspired when i wrote this one indeed.
noobapple Featured By Owner May 20, 2010
"Peter's boyfriend"
coco066 Featured By Owner May 21, 2010
Oh gosh your right :o Epic fail
Gadzooooks Featured By Owner May 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Really good for a first, but the ending is pretty short. Maybe next time you could write more after the climax?
coco066 Featured By Owner May 20, 2010
Thanks. Ill do my best. I kinda cut it shot 'cause it was 11 in the afternoon and i was sleepy but ill try next time
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